Sara Desmarais: A Change in our Marriage

A Change in Our Marriage by Sara Desmarais




Her (hopefully) excellent writing skills and insights into the (standard model) male mind are so well composed as to transport one into the world she creates ! Fabulous erotic reading ! Very exciting, no dull or unnecessary passages. The love is the main thing, without it the romance would be gone and it would be like all the other sexual literature purely decadent, instead with the real love and mutual creation of new roles for their still monogamous relationship ( which she uses the archaic term cuckold, sadly). The detail of the sex is absolutely fabulous , Thank You !!
However ..... it is 1. simply male dominance by violence replaced by female dominance by violence this is not good and does not lead to real happiness. (in short term role play for excitement or in training for both sexes as in bodybuilding or skiing instruction, a dominant / submissive short term interaction is necessary but NEVER  a permanent , all encompassing control, or happiness and harmony is never found.
2. Degradation and humiliation of the males genitals to create submission ( does she want big ? she can get him to fist her no (real) man can match that and vibrators are incredibly is any mans penis going to stay hard forever and vibrate ? again this is only a tool of putting a person down, which does not lead to happiness sexual or otherwise. 3. She never gets with sexual liberation and becomes bisexual with girls so she is a hypocrite for making him bisexual. 4. It is NOT necessary to have a conflict at all in a story. Tension and Release can be very exciting without a fight of wills ie: read solotouch.c at you'll be very excited without conflict. 5. Where is the love of the other lovers ? They are just sex objects, very inhuman, no disease testing ? no thought of family/children and real love with all concerned. So..... if She were to read: Sex at Dawn by Ryan and Jetha, Sacred Pleasure by R. Eisler, Our inner Ape by Franz de Wall, Sara could write sequels in which the bisexual, polyamourous, partnership can be created and the sexual and loving could be ABSOLUTELY AWESOME !!! p.S. the breasts on males is a reality which does exist now and will be a new evolution in males. See trans and science lit. on males breastfeeding children and getting  breasts for beauty. I love Sara too.



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